Contrastive Paragraph

If we pay attention to those two pictures, we can be inmediately aware of the number of differences between them . In the  first photograph we can see two teenagers while in the second there is an average man , there is a huge difference of age. Another difference could be the type of music that they play , the first picture seems to represent pop, rock and even punk music, but the second symbolises classic music. Those two pictures also differ in the kind of instrument those people use ; in the first one we can see an electric guitar , a mic and even a drum if we look at the background , its definetly a pop/rock band ; in contrast , in the second one we find a cello ,and there are also some music stands at the background which means that this man belongs to an orchestra.  In conclusion, those pictures are as opposite from each other as the moon and the sun.

Developing paragraphs

     

               HOW CAN WE BEST REHABILITATE PRISONERS SO THAT THEY CAN BE PRODUCTIVE MEMBERS OF SOCIETY?


              One of the biggest problems of our society is the crime rate, and how this number is getting higher and higher everyday. When a criminal goes to jail the most possible thing to happen ,is that he or she reoffends when they get out. This is extremely dangerous because , if they dont get to rehabilitate before they get out , prisoners will probably be ten times more violent. Because of those reasons , it's really important to find a way of integrating them in our society again.

             To meet this need , we can teach them that there is another lifestyle waiting for them , another option. One answer could be , offering classes of varied subjects so that they can have the opportunity to learn a job or a proffesion . Another option is to keep them entertained by doing physical and culture activities , in other words , to show them how to spend their free time in an accurate way. To sum up , prisoners can live like normal people again , we just have to teach them how. 

                                            COMPARISON POEM 

Shall I compare you to a sunny day ?

Your smile as bright as a star ,

Your gaze as warm as the sun.

Even though I can’t have you right now ,

I dream of it every night ,

To feel your scent near to me,

To hold you close in my arms.

My days have turned into an endless night ,

The moon is my only company,

Since you left my life.

Years will pass by ,

And maybe you’ll forget about me,

But I can promise you ,

That I will always love you,

Like the first day  .

What Guernica makes me feel?

                                     

                       Guernica , more than a work of art. When Pablo Picasso painted this amazing picture , he meant to do more than a simple painting ; he wanted to create a portrait of the spanish's society during Spanish Civil War (1936-1939) . When I admire this piece of art , a lot of feelings knock at my soul's door : fear, sadness, despair , hunger... You can see by the way he painted it , that he wanted to express all that sorrow and distress the spanish citizens were suffering during the war . If I close my eyes and think of this period of my country's history , I can feel the fear of the people , the noise of the bombs and the desperation of the people who didnt know if they were going to live another day. In conclusion , this painting is not only a work of art , its a mirror through which you can live the war in your own skin. 

OPINION PARAGRAPH EXERCISE

       

                                Nowadays, Internet has become one of the most useful tools in the world. Thanks to Internet , we can always be connected with our families and Friends , no matter if we are in the same city or in different countries. That’s why Marz Zuckerberg , Facebook co-founder , has launch along with other people, a globlal campaign to support, that every single person in this world has the right to be in contact with their families, and have access to any necessary information. His campaign has the goal of bringing the Internet to the UN refugee camps . 

We all have heard about the terrible war that its taking place in Syria, and forcing millions of people to leave their country ,in order to save their lives.  Because of this situation , the UE  has opened some refugee camps , but in those camps , those people are not being trated like a person worths. I totally support Zuckerberg’s idea , because maybe we can’t eradicate the war or the hunger , but at least we can help those people live better by making them feel like normal people, and not like prisoners of war. 

Describing people

                                                   DESCRIBING SOMEONE


                                    My mother, a role model to follow. Since I can remember , my mother has always been by my side; from my ballet recitals when I was just a little girl, to the worst moments of my teenage years. If I had to describe my mum , I would define her as a cheerful , funny , caring , sweet and brave person; she always tries to give her best at everything that she does, and thats an admirable virtue. Aside of being my mother , she is my friend ; she always listens to my problems and give me some excellent advice . She's also the most reliable person I know , I can always tell her my secrets without fearing that she judges me or tell anyone ; and I really apreciate that because in this world , you never know who you can trust. Since I was really little my mum has always fought for me and my brother , and it has never mattered if it was easy or not , she has just done it , because her love for us is unconditional , that makes her not only a fantastic mother , but an incredible woman too.  Maybe the most valuable thing that I have learnt from her , is that I have to be myself no matter what; since I can remember she has always told me and my brother one phrase: the two most important things in live are love, and to be true to yourself. In conclusion , there are a lot of reason why I admire my mother , but the most important one is, that she has made me who I am.