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               HOW CAN WE BEST REHABILITATE PRISONERS SO THAT THEY CAN BE PRODUCTIVE MEMBERS OF SOCIETY?


              One of the biggest problems of our society is the crime rate, and how this number is getting higher and higher everyday. When a criminal goes to jail the most possible thing to happen ,is that he or she reoffends when they get out. This is extremely dangerous because , if they dont get to rehabilitate before they get out , prisoners will probably be ten times more violent. Because of those reasons , it's really important to find a way of integrating them in our society again.

             To meet this need , we can teach them that there is another lifestyle waiting for them , another option. One answer could be , offering classes of varied subjects so that they can have the opportunity to learn a job or a proffesion . Another option is to keep them entertained by doing physical and culture activities , in other words , to show them how to spend their free time in an accurate way. To sum up , prisoners can live like normal people again , we just have to teach them how.